| Recent filming and editing of Main task first draft |

I have recently finished my first draft before the holidays had started and by the looks of how things were going, Mr. Titheridge said things were looking good for me, he seemed to have enjoyed the editing effects I had used to enhance my overall video quality, a few of the things he said to me were that I wasn't giving out enough of the message and not many codes were being applied so this is one thing I must improve on for my next draft. Mr. Titheridge also said that I needed to make my opening sequence longer by using longer shots and different types of shots, I take this advice on to assist me for my next drafts which I will hand in. I have already planned and thought to myself how I will set it all out, I am looking forward to editing and filming the new draft as I found much enjoyment from the first draft which I had done. Currently I havent managed to capture any images of producing the first draft but I will be able to have images available for the 2nd and 3rd draft which will help to show you the stages I went through for my work. images will be added to a slide show later on.